Friday, February 26, 2010

Marine city in 10 years

Everything looks the same, only the people have changed.
The sun still glitters off the river and
all the same buildings stand as they did ten years before.
Only the faces walking by are different.
The kids walking down the sidewalk
were not even in elementary school back in the day.
The river is the same brown color
and dairy queen still smells and tastes the same.
Although they may be different people
all the school kids have the same interests
and do the same things as our generation did.

5 comments:

  1. I love your poem! It has a good flow.
    Good job.

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  2. Good job, and that last statement is very true. The ideas that we have now and most likely no different than that of many generations to come. They may have different technology, who knows, but the high school mindset will always be there. Great Job!

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  3. Same tenn years ago and ten years later that how marine citywill always be nice job

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  4. Perfect description, nice words, nice rhythm, Perfect.

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  5. Ha this is exactly right. Marine city will forever be the same. It's pretty awesome. Good job.

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